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Brutal Boys Cry Blood
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Brutal Boys Cry Blood is the second in the Dark Academia series by USA Today bestselling author Steffanie Holmes
Brutal Boys Cry Blood is the second in the Dark Academia series by USA Today bestselling author Steffanie Holmes
424 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 10, 2021
About the author
Steffanie Holmes
86 books955 followersSteffanie Holmes is the author of steamy historical and paranormal romance. Her books feature clever, witty heroines, wild shifters, cunning witches and alpha males who get what they want.
Before becoming a writer, Steffanie worked as an archaeologist and museum curator. She loves to explore historical settings and ancient conceptions of love and possession. From Dark Age Europe to crumbling gothic estates, Steffanie is fascinated with how love can blossom between the most unlikely characters.
Steffanie lives in New Zealand with her husband and a horde of cantankerous cats. Learn more about Steffanie at her website: www.steffanieholmes.com. She also writes dark science fiction under the name S C Green.
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Before becoming a writer, Steffanie worked as an archaeologist and museum curator. She loves to explore historical settings and ancient conceptions of love and possession. From Dark Age Europe to crumbling gothic estates, Steffanie is fascinated with how love can blossom between the most unlikely characters.
Steffanie lives in New Zealand with her husband and a horde of cantankerous cats. Learn more about Steffanie at her website: www.steffanieholmes.com. She also writes dark science fiction under the name S C Green.
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June 25, 2022
MF/MMF Romance
Dark Secret Society taboo romance
Book 2 in duet
1 star
And the most disappointing read so far this year goes to…This fucking shitshow right here. What in the actual fuck kind of sequel is this? Book one sets the stage for what should be a hot MMF book that includes a priest, a dark prince and a true crime podcast chick. Georgina Fisher (George) is hell bent on solving the murders that have taken place on campus involving a secret society and the death of her roommate but a dark prince and a debauched priest cause her to get a bit sidetracked in all the best ways. Or what should have been anyways. This had all the trappings of a book that was going to knock my socks off with hot sex and a bit of savagery bringing the sick fucks to justice. INSTEAD…
✅ I got an OTT secret society so bogged down in Greek mythology, I needed to take a class to understand who and what TF was going on and I love Greek mythology so for me to be confused, says a lot.
✅ I got the most unsexy, underwhelming sex scenes imaginable that kept getting interrupted anytime the two boys were going to go past kissing. If you want to do a dark MMF, you can’t have one foot out the door when it comes to the sex. I will say the rosary bead scenes and the dual “yes, Father” were great but they ended as soon as they were introduced. What a waste.
✅ This author obviously lost her thesaurus because if I have to see the word ‘alabaster’ again anytime soon, I will die. His alabaster skin, cheeks, flesh. Please get a new adjective when describing William’s complexion. PLEASE.
✅ The most convoluted plot twist ever if it can even be considered a twist and all of the “Justice” was incredibly lackluster. Really???
✅ Another POV of a secondary character that is going to be the heroine of the next book but it had no place being inside this one. Give me William or Sebastian’s POV! WTF
I cannot.
Dark Secret Society taboo romance
Book 2 in duet
1 star
And the most disappointing read so far this year goes to…This fucking shitshow right here. What in the actual fuck kind of sequel is this? Book one sets the stage for what should be a hot MMF book that includes a priest, a dark prince and a true crime podcast chick. Georgina Fisher (George) is hell bent on solving the murders that have taken place on campus involving a secret society and the death of her roommate but a dark prince and a debauched priest cause her to get a bit sidetracked in all the best ways. Or what should have been anyways. This had all the trappings of a book that was going to knock my socks off with hot sex and a bit of savagery bringing the sick fucks to justice. INSTEAD…
✅ I got an OTT secret society so bogged down in Greek mythology, I needed to take a class to understand who and what TF was going on and I love Greek mythology so for me to be confused, says a lot.
✅ I got the most unsexy, underwhelming sex scenes imaginable that kept getting interrupted anytime the two boys were going to go past kissing. If you want to do a dark MMF, you can’t have one foot out the door when it comes to the sex. I will say the rosary bead scenes and the dual “yes, Father” were great but they ended as soon as they were introduced. What a waste.
✅ This author obviously lost her thesaurus because if I have to see the word ‘alabaster’ again anytime soon, I will die. His alabaster skin, cheeks, flesh. Please get a new adjective when describing William’s complexion. PLEASE.
✅ The most convoluted plot twist ever if it can even be considered a twist and all of the “Justice” was incredibly lackluster. Really???
✅ Another POV of a secondary character that is going to be the heroine of the next book but it had no place being inside this one. Give me William or Sebastian’s POV! WTF
I cannot.
May 14, 2023
Oh dear . . . .Whatever this book was trying to achieve, it just didn't reach. I spent most of this book struggling, finding myself a little bored at times, and bogged down with all the Greek mythology.
Taking the main points of this plot, it would appear that this would be quite fast-paced, yet it isn't?
I did enjoy the characters, however, and the ending.
I'm sure others will love this book bit it just wasn't for me.
Taking the main points of this plot, it would appear that this would be quite fast-paced, yet it isn't?
I did enjoy the characters, however, and the ending.
I'm sure others will love this book bit it just wasn't for me.
April 13, 2022
It pains me to do this. I really enjoyed the first book in this duology. The bully prince who can't help but lust after the Mary Sue and is in competition with the tortured priest. But this book. Sebastian goes from trying to balance his priesthood and his primal need for George to all of a sudden dirty texting during a sermon and being the dom in the trio with no hesitations. William goes from dark, brooding rich boy to just a boring, plain simp for George and Sebastian. He lost all personality and luster in this book.
Suddenly, we get another POV but it's from her friend, Leigh, and not the boys? And it was only 2 chapters so completely unnecessary.
THE WHOLE SET UP FOR BOOK TWO WAS TO HAVE A SAUCY MMF RELATIONSHIP! So why were there always interruptions when it was about to have more than fierce smooching and a little bit of action.
Just disappointing. The rosary bead scene wasn't even enough this time. The "twists" weren't like WOW WHAT JUST HAPPENED, like the author thought.
Suddenly, we get another POV but it's from her friend, Leigh, and not the boys? And it was only 2 chapters so completely unnecessary.
THE WHOLE SET UP FOR BOOK TWO WAS TO HAVE A SAUCY MMF RELATIONSHIP! So why were there always interruptions when it was about to have more than fierce smooching and a little bit of action.
Just disappointing. The rosary bead scene wasn't even enough this time. The "twists" weren't like WOW WHAT JUST HAPPENED, like the author thought.
July 6, 2022
Well this was ... interesting. It was fun and entertaining to read, but where I expected a steamy F/M/M; I got .
If you're looking for a dark academia setting with secret socities, a Mary-Sue caught between two suuuuper hot dudes and , then this one's for you. If not, then I'd recommend you skip that one.
If you're looking for a dark academia setting with secret socities, a Mary-Sue caught between two suuuuper hot dudes and , then this one's for you. If not, then I'd recommend you skip that one.
June 9, 2022
Um, this is not what it says it is.
I honestly had no idea what the hell was going on half the time. In a good way, i guess.
I absolutely love the story and the vibes and the cult and all that.
Idk if i recommend this book tho. I really don’t know.
I honestly had no idea what the hell was going on half the time. In a good way, i guess.
I absolutely love the story and the vibes and the cult and all that.
Idk if i recommend this book tho. I really don’t know.
January 1, 2022
Brutal Boys Cry Blood is the concluding part of this duet and so much was crammed into it. It's a blink and you'll miss something read.
George (FMC) is now in the thick of it by being in The Orpheus Society trying to uncover secrets, lies and who the murderer of her roommate is. Oh and it's a goody and one I didn't even see coming a mile off it was that good. Mix into that plenty of sizzling sexy scenarios between George, William and Sebastian. Phew a flaming hot father Sebastian definitely steamed up my kindle! You wouldn't mind repenting to him! Lol. It was a cracking finale and I can't wait for Leigh's book now
George (FMC) is now in the thick of it by being in The Orpheus Society trying to uncover secrets, lies and who the murderer of her roommate is. Oh and it's a goody and one I didn't even see coming a mile off it was that good. Mix into that plenty of sizzling sexy scenarios between George, William and Sebastian. Phew a flaming hot father Sebastian definitely steamed up my kindle! You wouldn't mind repenting to him! Lol. It was a cracking finale and I can't wait for Leigh's book now
March 2, 2023
If you read my review for book 1, you know I was sold on this series from the moment Sebastian entered the scene. He was... ideal. The forbidden hot priest. And the only reason I read book 2.
That's why I'm so devastated, because I loved him dearly, and I was sure this second book would give me more of a good thing, but instead, I ended up disliking him entirely. I never liked George to begin with, and William was always a bit basic. So, the throuple aspect wasn't appealing to me.
I knew these books wouldn't be incredible, I mostly wanted a spicy read to get me out of a reading slump, but I was still hoping to feel satisfied in the end. Instead, all of the characters I enjoyed had such a huge personality shift, that there wasn't much left to enjoy in this book by the end of it.
It pains me to say it, but the hot priest was not worth reading either book.
Just watch Fleabag instead.
That's why I'm so devastated, because I loved him dearly, and I was sure this second book would give me more of a good thing, but instead, I ended up disliking him entirely. I never liked George to begin with, and William was always a bit basic. So, the throuple aspect wasn't appealing to me.
I knew these books wouldn't be incredible, I mostly wanted a spicy read to get me out of a reading slump, but I was still hoping to feel satisfied in the end. Instead, all of the characters I enjoyed had such a huge personality shift, that there wasn't much left to enjoy in this book by the end of it.
It pains me to say it, but the hot priest was not worth reading either book.
Just watch Fleabag instead.
December 10, 2021
The suspense mystery in this story was done really well, the romance not so much, I didn't even feel like the characters were in love.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 11, 2021
When I read Pretty Girls Make Graves I went in totally blind. I hadn’t even read the Stonehurst Prep series. Pretty Girls Make Graves rocked my world. I had such a book hangover it wasn’t funny. I didn’t know what to do with myself. Since then I’ve been counting down to this books release. It was worth every eternally torturous minute.
If Pretty Girls Make Graves destroyed you too, this book will put you back together. It was everything I needed to be whole again. This duet is one of the most intense and haunting I’ve ever read. George, William and Sebastian feel like a part of me now.
This book is everything. The spicy scenes will leaves you squirming and panting for more. The relationship between George, William and Sebastian is so beautiful and perfect. These three fit together seamlessly. I’ve read a lot of ménage and RH romance but this is hands down my favorite MMF romance, period. I swooned when they were together and ached when they were apart.
This book is still investigating the deaths of Keely and Khloe and the Orpheus Society too. It’s got sizzling spice, mystery, angst and action.
Story 5/5, Spice 5/5 Darkness 3/5, Angst 3.5/5
Fast burn, the sexiness starts around 13% and the first time they get down to business is around 24%.
No condoms, no virgins, both Hs are reformed manwhores, no OW/OM drama, Sebastian is a bossy, dominant priest so there is that, lots of ménage scenes, mostly no push away but some push away from William at times, there is a bit of separation here from both Hs for different reasons but it’s necessary and doesn’t comprise a huge percentage of the book. No cheating, no cliffhanger and HEA.
Safety - there’s zero OW/OM drama and no cheating but this book does have some very dark themes. There’s kidnapping, claustrophobic situations, cult type activities that I don’t want to reveal because I don’t want to spoil anything but if you have triggers look for all the warnings and proceed with caution.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
If Pretty Girls Make Graves destroyed you too, this book will put you back together. It was everything I needed to be whole again. This duet is one of the most intense and haunting I’ve ever read. George, William and Sebastian feel like a part of me now.
This book is everything. The spicy scenes will leaves you squirming and panting for more. The relationship between George, William and Sebastian is so beautiful and perfect. These three fit together seamlessly. I’ve read a lot of ménage and RH romance but this is hands down my favorite MMF romance, period. I swooned when they were together and ached when they were apart.
This book is still investigating the deaths of Keely and Khloe and the Orpheus Society too. It’s got sizzling spice, mystery, angst and action.
Story 5/5, Spice 5/5 Darkness 3/5, Angst 3.5/5
Fast burn, the sexiness starts around 13% and the first time they get down to business is around 24%.
No condoms, no virgins, both Hs are reformed manwhores, no OW/OM drama, Sebastian is a bossy, dominant priest so there is that, lots of ménage scenes, mostly no push away but some push away from William at times, there is a bit of separation here from both Hs for different reasons but it’s necessary and doesn’t comprise a huge percentage of the book. No cheating, no cliffhanger and HEA.
Safety - there’s zero OW/OM drama and no cheating but this book does have some very dark themes. There’s kidnapping, claustrophobic situations, cult type activities that I don’t want to reveal because I don’t want to spoil anything but if you have triggers look for all the warnings and proceed with caution.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
January 27, 2022
The second part of the duology following George's life at Blackfriars and with the Orpheus society takes a much darker turn that book one. Being initiated as an Orphean and living her dream dating life might be only an illusion, a false security blanket that could be pulled from under her in a second. Situations change in a split second like on a whim, and so do the people. And as more and more secrets about the Orpheans come to light, George has a hard decision to make - or live with. Would she be enough to survive, protect the people she cares about, and keep her beloved? Might not be the case in the end..
Dark and haunting tale that kept me on my toes all the time, reading late into the night and never going to put the book aside. George is already trained and hardened by her previous life experience and the events she went through at the academy, yet the level of cruelty and madness is escalated here and she would need also a lot of luck to come out unscathed. Mentally or physically. However, some things leave scars, even invisible ones. And George carries a lot of invisible scars, which makes her strong and passionate. William and Sebastian are both complex personalities with their flaws and strengths but also unique flavors that distinguish them, they stand out across the characters not only in this book. Especially the contrast in Sebastian is touching, more so coming from me as a catholic. Yet maybe the most complex and most intriguing character for me is Monty. With everything that was revealed, Montague Cavendish is a one in a million character, with his odd mind and complicated personality. My feelings towards him are very complicated after finishing the book but each thought spent on him was worth the time. After all his I have all my hopes turned to Leigh and hope she increases the stakes even more.
Dark and haunting tale that kept me on my toes all the time, reading late into the night and never going to put the book aside. George is already trained and hardened by her previous life experience and the events she went through at the academy, yet the level of cruelty and madness is escalated here and she would need also a lot of luck to come out unscathed. Mentally or physically. However, some things leave scars, even invisible ones. And George carries a lot of invisible scars, which makes her strong and passionate. William and Sebastian are both complex personalities with their flaws and strengths but also unique flavors that distinguish them, they stand out across the characters not only in this book. Especially the contrast in Sebastian is touching, more so coming from me as a catholic. Yet maybe the most complex and most intriguing character for me is Monty. With everything that was revealed, Montague Cavendish is a one in a million character, with his odd mind and complicated personality. My feelings towards him are very complicated after finishing the book but each thought spent on him was worth the time. After all his I have all my hopes turned to Leigh and hope she increases the stakes even more.
January 18, 2023
A few weeks ago I was complaining that the Dark Academia I read wasn't really a Dark Academia but simply a romance set at an elite boarding school. Ever since then I was actually in the mood for a real Dark Academia. A book with murders and death and scary rituals. And then I remembered that, before I finished the Claws series, which was a mistake, I read the first book in this duology. And now I did finish the Claws series so I could dive into the second book without getting any more spoilers!
I wanted Dark Academia and I got Dark Academia. The cult in this book got a little unhinged, but that was half the fun. The stakes were high. We knew that our heroine was at risk and could end up dead. These people weren't just rich and awful. They were dangerous. And of course at some point I did see coming where this story was gonna go and how it was gonna end. But the ride made it worth every sentence and word and chapter.
I also absolutely loved how the romance developed and ended eventually. I'm a Christian (you wouldn't guess that if you look at the books I read, but fine...) and therefore including priests in the romance always feels a little tricky, but this book did it amazingly well. Especially because despite his romantic feelings the priest never doubted his faith or his God. He simply doubted if the celibate was truly needed. And I think I share that doubt with him.
I most of all loved the heroine in this story. She's smart and intelligent and she most of all has this longing for justice. And yet, she does show that sometimes justice isn't people locked behind bars. Sometimes it's accepting that to get that justice you have to break and destroy more than you would gain in the end. The book did a great job showing that sometimes justice according to the law still isn't truly justice.
I wanted Dark Academia and I got Dark Academia. The cult in this book got a little unhinged, but that was half the fun. The stakes were high. We knew that our heroine was at risk and could end up dead. These people weren't just rich and awful. They were dangerous. And of course at some point I did see coming where this story was gonna go and how it was gonna end. But the ride made it worth every sentence and word and chapter.
I also absolutely loved how the romance developed and ended eventually. I'm a Christian (you wouldn't guess that if you look at the books I read, but fine...) and therefore including priests in the romance always feels a little tricky, but this book did it amazingly well. Especially because despite his romantic feelings the priest never doubted his faith or his God. He simply doubted if the celibate was truly needed. And I think I share that doubt with him.
I most of all loved the heroine in this story. She's smart and intelligent and she most of all has this longing for justice. And yet, she does show that sometimes justice isn't people locked behind bars. Sometimes it's accepting that to get that justice you have to break and destroy more than you would gain in the end. The book did a great job showing that sometimes justice according to the law still isn't truly justice.
December 13, 2021
Holmes is a master storyteller. This story grabs at you, imbeds deeply into the psychological part of your brain, and makes you rethink what you know.
Georgina/George, is caught up in the whims of the Orpheus Society. The members, who are the most popular, richest, and beautiful, flaunt themselves throughout the University.
At the ending of "Pretty Girls Make Graves." George, gets her heart broken by her boyfriend William. She has also let the Priest Sebastian go. It was a raw, emotional moment.
As book two begins, George has gone with the society for the summer. They end up staying at Forsyth Hall, a mansion that would rival a very large castle. When George finds out it belongs to Williams family, she is overwhelmed. William is still angry with George and refuses to speak to her. In an attempt to find out information, George begins to ask questions, sneak around, and avoid one of the more violent members.
There are many things that happen that the reader must pay attention to. This is especially true when George tries to figure out why girls have gone missing, or been murdered, while the police do nothing.
I am such a fan of this series. Holmes had me guessing all the way through. One of the top three books I have read in 2021. I recommend this book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Georgina/George, is caught up in the whims of the Orpheus Society. The members, who are the most popular, richest, and beautiful, flaunt themselves throughout the University.
At the ending of "Pretty Girls Make Graves." George, gets her heart broken by her boyfriend William. She has also let the Priest Sebastian go. It was a raw, emotional moment.
As book two begins, George has gone with the society for the summer. They end up staying at Forsyth Hall, a mansion that would rival a very large castle. When George finds out it belongs to Williams family, she is overwhelmed. William is still angry with George and refuses to speak to her. In an attempt to find out information, George begins to ask questions, sneak around, and avoid one of the more violent members.
There are many things that happen that the reader must pay attention to. This is especially true when George tries to figure out why girls have gone missing, or been murdered, while the police do nothing.
I am such a fan of this series. Holmes had me guessing all the way through. One of the top three books I have read in 2021. I recommend this book.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
December 16, 2021
Rating: 3.5 stars
This book certainly went heavier on the suspense/mystery aspect than the romance, so the vibe just felt different from the first. I liked the romance we were given here, but I found myself forced to ignore some weirdness between how I'm not gonna lie, a part of me really missed the bully aspect that was lacking in this book! For those reasons, I was torn between 3 and 4 stars and landed here.
Overall, this was an enjoyable duology to read!
This book certainly went heavier on the suspense/mystery aspect than the romance, so the vibe just felt different from the first. I liked the romance we were given here, but I found myself forced to ignore some weirdness between how I'm not gonna lie, a part of me really missed the bully aspect that was lacking in this book! For those reasons, I was torn between 3 and 4 stars and landed here.
Overall, this was an enjoyable duology to read!
December 9, 2021
I read book 1 which ended with Georgina (George) being walked into a crypt so was really looking forward to this after the cliff hanger book 1 ended on.
This book is even better than book 1, it starts the summer at end of year 1 and University and ends the summer after they graduate in year 3.
There are themes of forgiveness, grief and the book takes twists and turns.
You become invested in George, William and Sebastian love triangle and you are willing it to work out.
There is mystery and the book in no way is predictable.
Loved it and highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
This book is even better than book 1, it starts the summer at end of year 1 and University and ends the summer after they graduate in year 3.
There are themes of forgiveness, grief and the book takes twists and turns.
You become invested in George, William and Sebastian love triangle and you are willing it to work out.
There is mystery and the book in no way is predictable.
Loved it and highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
December 30, 2022
Taboo Turn
The first book was so tame compared to this one! Lots of steam and mystery and naughty intrigues. A few red herrings. Wished she would have leaned into the M/M romance, but the age difference (and power dynamics) were a bit too far. At the very least, I wasn’t expecting the plot to shift when and where it did. The end left me feeling like the author intended us to question the meaning of forgiveness. Acres and acres of terrible, broken choices and poor decisions.
The first book was so tame compared to this one! Lots of steam and mystery and naughty intrigues. A few red herrings. Wished she would have leaned into the M/M romance, but the age difference (and power dynamics) were a bit too far. At the very least, I wasn’t expecting the plot to shift when and where it did. The end left me feeling like the author intended us to question the meaning of forgiveness. Acres and acres of terrible, broken choices and poor decisions.
January 9, 2022
I LOVED THIS SO SO MUCH. it’s a 10/5 stars for me.
i loved william, i loved sebastian, i loved diana, i loved monty and claws and leigh because every single one of them were written so beautifully!
i loved william, i loved sebastian, i loved diana, i loved monty and claws and leigh because every single one of them were written so beautifully!
February 20, 2023
Meh this was ok. It did get steamier but also much darker. But I was bored for most of the book.
February 8, 2024
Simplemente terrible lol
October 13, 2022
18+
TW: cannibalism, sexualization of religion, poison, mentions of suicide
I made myself read this so I would know what happened but I shouldn’t have wasted my time tbh
The plot was honestly predictable and the fun parts of the first book were completely disregarded. George suffered from the mean girls affect where now that she’s in with the cool kids she’s no longer focused on taking them down, she’s doing all this research then she’s like ??? Maybe I won’t tell people… girlie WHAT
The sex scenes were basically non-existent, the throuple wasn’t at all interesting and the mystery was so stretched out it was ridiculous. She gave us chapters from Leigh’s POV to set up some other series she’s planning and made the book unbearably longer
ALSO she literally self inserted her own name
Don’t bother reading this book, read the first couple chapters for William/George reconciliation and the spare yourself fr
TW: cannibalism, sexualization of religion, poison, mentions of suicide
I made myself read this so I would know what happened but I shouldn’t have wasted my time tbh
The plot was honestly predictable and the fun parts of the first book were completely disregarded. George suffered from the mean girls affect where now that she’s in with the cool kids she’s no longer focused on taking them down, she’s doing all this research then she’s like ??? Maybe I won’t tell people… girlie WHAT
The sex scenes were basically non-existent, the throuple wasn’t at all interesting and the mystery was so stretched out it was ridiculous. She gave us chapters from Leigh’s POV to set up some other series she’s planning and made the book unbearably longer
ALSO she literally self inserted her own name
Don’t bother reading this book, read the first couple chapters for William/George reconciliation and the spare yourself fr
December 12, 2021
I thought I’d enjoy this one even with the cringe podcast. But no, it’s lukewarm at best, the sex feels like a chore and it’s a reverse harem! Also the scenes get interrupted by the stupidest shit!?
And to top it off, literally my favourite character dies! Fuck this shit!
And to top it off, literally my favourite character dies! Fuck this shit!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 15, 2021
DNF....so sad 😩☹️🥺
Ok so even though this series was under reverse harem it’s totally not! At least what I think reverse harem should be. But others might agree differently which is fine. To each their own. I suspected with the first book since it didn’t out right say RH but was under the RH search. Anyway I loved the first book! University, Secret society’s, history, ancient peoples & religion are all fascinating! I’ve read a couple of the authors works before even finished one of her series so I know her writing is amazing. The story plot is here but I just can’t get over the relationship twist. MMF. I would even prefer Monty becoming a love interest than that. & didn’t it say somewhere in the first book they were bothers. I skimmed the last chapter so I guess...they become it. Idk I’m hurt lol bc It didn’t plan out the way I wanted. Regardless if the relationship twist doesn’t bother you it will be a good read Im assuming but personally if I’m not invested in the relationship component I cannot further the series. Oh btw the priest does a totally 180 it seems personality wise. Like did we ever truly know him??!
Ok so even though this series was under reverse harem it’s totally not! At least what I think reverse harem should be. But others might agree differently which is fine. To each their own. I suspected with the first book since it didn’t out right say RH but was under the RH search. Anyway I loved the first book! University, Secret society’s, history, ancient peoples & religion are all fascinating! I’ve read a couple of the authors works before even finished one of her series so I know her writing is amazing. The story plot is here but I just can’t get over the relationship twist. MMF. I would even prefer Monty becoming a love interest than that. & didn’t it say somewhere in the first book they were bothers. I skimmed the last chapter so I guess...they become it. Idk I’m hurt lol bc It didn’t plan out the way I wanted. Regardless if the relationship twist doesn’t bother you it will be a good read Im assuming but personally if I’m not invested in the relationship component I cannot further the series. Oh btw the priest does a totally 180 it seems personality wise. Like did we ever truly know him??!
January 1, 2022
Wow
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow
Apparently I can't just leave the word "wow" over and over again for a review. So holy effing wow.
Wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow wow
Apparently I can't just leave the word "wow" over and over again for a review. So holy effing wow.
January 8, 2022
Well, I truly hope that all of those that are part of a secret society around the world are a lot less dumb that the characters here.
I'm only giving this a 3 stars rating because of:
1. that MM, but I needed more of that.
2. hot threesome
3. "Yes, father" during sex *
*Most important of it all.
I'm only giving this a 3 stars rating because of:
1. that MM, but I needed more of that.
2. hot threesome
3. "Yes, father" during sex *
*Most important of it all.
January 5, 2023
DNF'ing at 21%
It probably should have happened way sooner, but the sentence "It feels like I have a hundred nipples" just really put me over the ick edge. 😆
The writing is awful and it definitely feels like we've lost the original plot of the movie.
2023 is all about doing what makes me happy. And this made me quite unhappy.
It probably should have happened way sooner, but the sentence "It feels like I have a hundred nipples" just really put me over the ick edge. 😆
The writing is awful and it definitely feels like we've lost the original plot of the movie.
2023 is all about doing what makes me happy. And this made me quite unhappy.
June 11, 2022
I got 17 chapters in before I decided that this was basically a history book. I do like greek myth but not when this is meant to be a romance mystery book 😒
January 23, 2022
The Conclusion. George Finally Uncovers The Truth About Devils Night
** Spoilers Ahead.
You Have Been Warned***
Ever had book, that you can’t wait to read.
So much so, that you get everything that needs doing for the day , so you can sit down and devour it.
Well, I thought THAT was this book
Unfortunately…
This book disappointed me.
Four chapters in,…and I was ready in turmoil about whether to continue.
Let me just start by saying, the plot revolving around all the Classical Greek Mythology, (the Dionysus cult) was crazy, and I can’t BELIEVE the amount of research that Steffanie Holmes must have put in to get all her little ducks lined up in a row.
I feel like I should have come out of this book with a PHD! Of some kind.
As fascinating as it was to learn about all the Greek Gods and there relevance to modern day society, it also got to be a little much.
Sometimes I wasn’t down for the Classical Greek lessons and just wanted the rest of the plot to move along,
Some chapters just went on, and, on, and on.
As the story pushes to it conclusion, we are gifted with the ultimate gruesome telling of the demise of Keely, and Khloe May finally finding out what happen to them in their last hours,
The reveal of the killer/killers also was just as surprising.
NOW.
What I didn’t like.
The George, William,Sebastian relationship.
Despite the fact that this enter into polyamorous territory: not my favourite genre:,
I have issues with the relationship that Sebastian develops first with William, then with George.
If I am correct here, doing the math, there was a nine year age difference between Sebastian and the younger William and George….Okay
As the story unfolds we learn that Sebastian and William first became intimate when William was just fifteen years of age.
Sebastian had been a family friend, he grew up with, the shoulder to lean on when his father, Henry, was unable to show him affection.
When Willians adored mother took her own life (?)
So when the twenty - four year old, now Priest, consummates his relationship with the fifteen year old William, it comes across as if the older, more dominant partner (Sebastian) had been grooming him from a young age.
It’s like he took advantage of the younger William under the guise of “ he was just doing Gods work” he “couldn’t bare to see him suffering”
It was “ comfort”
( The same excuse use he came up with for sleeping with Isabelle BTW)
I got the same icky feeling when Sebastian then turns his attentions towards George at Blackfriars.
With all his, “Let’s study Greek in my rooms”.
Its kinda like “come up to my room and see my etchings”.
George, also was having difficulty ‘fitting in’.
Dealing with loneliness, and bouts of depression, and homesickness.
Once again Sebastian (I feel) took advantage.
Swooping in for his own sexual gratification.
And just when I thought my creepy factor couldn’t get ANY worse.
William referring to Sebastian as “FATHER” while the older man jerks him off!
While George witness…WOW!
Followed by George’s inner musings about how HOT she finds it.
Only for HER to go and do the very SAME THING!
The dominance, and power Sebastian held over them was boarder line predatory.
Then to try and make it not seem awkward, the author waxes lyrical ( via George’s thought) about the way both Seb, And William both look at each other with love, and longing.
It was Sebastian’s character that made this whole read uncomfortable for me.
Yeah…I KNOW right!
Not the bonkers Monty.
Who woulda thunk it!
God, At times I just wanted to shake George she got me so frustrated with her ballsy one minute, compliant the next attitude.
‘I’m George Fisher. I’ve thought myself out of worse scrapes than this.”
Yeah. True.
Thank goodness for Daddy’s tool box,which was George’s equivalent of Dr. Who’s sonic screwdriver.
( it always comes in handy when you don’t even Know you have it)
Also. Lucky you have a friend like Claws to come to the rescue whenever the author leads us down a path and can’t find a way to wrap up a solution.
Claws know people that can put things to rights.
( *cough* Tiberius)
So for a while there..Miss Marple…I mean George, ended up getting what was coming to her for being seduced by the shiny set of Orpheans.
Now. Some side irritations.
CAN LEIGH STOP TRYING TO MAKE “BOSS” HAPPEN!
I also can’t STAND IT when authors self prompt their own books in the plot I’d another book.
It’s sooo cringe!
But! The award for the most cringe worthy moment goes to…
The bit where William was doing his gush worthy confession to George…
Just about threw in the towel right there.
As it was I didn’t make it to the end ( got to 91%)
Just couldn’t put myself through a Sebastian, William, George HEA love fest, gag worthy ending.
So for the sake of my sanity…I baled
** Spoilers Ahead.
You Have Been Warned***
Ever had book, that you can’t wait to read.
So much so, that you get everything that needs doing for the day , so you can sit down and devour it.
Well, I thought THAT was this book
Unfortunately…
This book disappointed me.
Four chapters in,…and I was ready in turmoil about whether to continue.
Let me just start by saying, the plot revolving around all the Classical Greek Mythology, (the Dionysus cult) was crazy, and I can’t BELIEVE the amount of research that Steffanie Holmes must have put in to get all her little ducks lined up in a row.
I feel like I should have come out of this book with a PHD! Of some kind.
As fascinating as it was to learn about all the Greek Gods and there relevance to modern day society, it also got to be a little much.
Sometimes I wasn’t down for the Classical Greek lessons and just wanted the rest of the plot to move along,
Some chapters just went on, and, on, and on.
As the story pushes to it conclusion, we are gifted with the ultimate gruesome telling of the demise of Keely, and Khloe May finally finding out what happen to them in their last hours,
The reveal of the killer/killers also was just as surprising.
NOW.
What I didn’t like.
The George, William,Sebastian relationship.
Despite the fact that this enter into polyamorous territory: not my favourite genre:,
I have issues with the relationship that Sebastian develops first with William, then with George.
If I am correct here, doing the math, there was a nine year age difference between Sebastian and the younger William and George….Okay
As the story unfolds we learn that Sebastian and William first became intimate when William was just fifteen years of age.
Sebastian had been a family friend, he grew up with, the shoulder to lean on when his father, Henry, was unable to show him affection.
When Willians adored mother took her own life (?)
So when the twenty - four year old, now Priest, consummates his relationship with the fifteen year old William, it comes across as if the older, more dominant partner (Sebastian) had been grooming him from a young age.
It’s like he took advantage of the younger William under the guise of “ he was just doing Gods work” he “couldn’t bare to see him suffering”
It was “ comfort”
( The same excuse use he came up with for sleeping with Isabelle BTW)
I got the same icky feeling when Sebastian then turns his attentions towards George at Blackfriars.
With all his, “Let’s study Greek in my rooms”.
Its kinda like “come up to my room and see my etchings”.
George, also was having difficulty ‘fitting in’.
Dealing with loneliness, and bouts of depression, and homesickness.
Once again Sebastian (I feel) took advantage.
Swooping in for his own sexual gratification.
And just when I thought my creepy factor couldn’t get ANY worse.
William referring to Sebastian as “FATHER” while the older man jerks him off!
While George witness…WOW!
Followed by George’s inner musings about how HOT she finds it.
Only for HER to go and do the very SAME THING!
The dominance, and power Sebastian held over them was boarder line predatory.
Then to try and make it not seem awkward, the author waxes lyrical ( via George’s thought) about the way both Seb, And William both look at each other with love, and longing.
It was Sebastian’s character that made this whole read uncomfortable for me.
Yeah…I KNOW right!
Not the bonkers Monty.
Who woulda thunk it!
God, At times I just wanted to shake George she got me so frustrated with her ballsy one minute, compliant the next attitude.
‘I’m George Fisher. I’ve thought myself out of worse scrapes than this.”
Yeah. True.
Thank goodness for Daddy’s tool box,which was George’s equivalent of Dr. Who’s sonic screwdriver.
( it always comes in handy when you don’t even Know you have it)
Also. Lucky you have a friend like Claws to come to the rescue whenever the author leads us down a path and can’t find a way to wrap up a solution.
Claws know people that can put things to rights.
( *cough* Tiberius)
So for a while there..Miss Marple…I mean George, ended up getting what was coming to her for being seduced by the shiny set of Orpheans.
Now. Some side irritations.
CAN LEIGH STOP TRYING TO MAKE “BOSS” HAPPEN!
I also can’t STAND IT when authors self prompt their own books in the plot I’d another book.
It’s sooo cringe!
But! The award for the most cringe worthy moment goes to…
The bit where William was doing his gush worthy confession to George…
Just about threw in the towel right there.
As it was I didn’t make it to the end ( got to 91%)
Just couldn’t put myself through a Sebastian, William, George HEA love fest, gag worthy ending.
So for the sake of my sanity…I baled
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 12, 2023
I finished this duet within one day, due to skimming most of it. About a third of the way through the first book, I just couldn’t bare to truly focus any longer.
My personal reading opinions here - I can’t stand writing that speaks to the audience. It feels very, very YA to me and “dark” + smut + YA just doesn’t mix well, in my opinion. Having the MC acknowledge the reader takes me out of the world that the book is supposed to be building. Speaking of world building, it was pretty minimal and seemed to play it safe by mainly sucking inspiration from other already established, fictional pieces of work (the school’s initial imagery was painted as “Hogwarts, but different” or something along those lines). I was also a bit thrown off by the cartoonish use of British language/mannerisms. I’m American, but even I’m fairly positive that the way some of these characters spoke and the lingo used is not timely and accurate.
Those were my main annoyances with the first book. I’m sure I missed things, possibly both good and bad, due to the skimming. It seems I missed a certain bathroom scene that I’m glad I did…because I already don’t particularly like the MMC. The MMC seems to justify bullying the FMC by claiming that she is “strong” and can handle it. I guess bully romances like this just aren’t for me.
My opinion on this book/the 2nd part of the duet - there were two spicy scenes that were the only memorable parts for me, and that’s mainly due to Sebastian Pearce and his dominant aura. I may have missed a lot of relationship building, but this whole love triangle just really threw me off. Did Sebastian and William begin their sexual relationship (when William was fifteen years old) when Sebastian was eighteen+ years of age? If so…big, giant yikes. I don’t recall the age gap between those two characters, but I would assume it’s more than three years. This priest likes ‘em young, it seems. Shockingly, this guy was the most likable character throughout the duet.
I may be judging unfairly, since I skimmed this and may have missed a lot. But a story that can’t grasp enough of my interest to continue after reading 1/3rd of it will never get more than a one star rating from me. The concept was there, but the execution left a lot to be desired.
My personal reading opinions here - I can’t stand writing that speaks to the audience. It feels very, very YA to me and “dark” + smut + YA just doesn’t mix well, in my opinion. Having the MC acknowledge the reader takes me out of the world that the book is supposed to be building. Speaking of world building, it was pretty minimal and seemed to play it safe by mainly sucking inspiration from other already established, fictional pieces of work (the school’s initial imagery was painted as “Hogwarts, but different” or something along those lines). I was also a bit thrown off by the cartoonish use of British language/mannerisms. I’m American, but even I’m fairly positive that the way some of these characters spoke and the lingo used is not timely and accurate.
Those were my main annoyances with the first book. I’m sure I missed things, possibly both good and bad, due to the skimming. It seems I missed a certain bathroom scene that I’m glad I did…because I already don’t particularly like the MMC. The MMC seems to justify bullying the FMC by claiming that she is “strong” and can handle it. I guess bully romances like this just aren’t for me.
My opinion on this book/the 2nd part of the duet - there were two spicy scenes that were the only memorable parts for me, and that’s mainly due to Sebastian Pearce and his dominant aura. I may have missed a lot of relationship building, but this whole love triangle just really threw me off. Did Sebastian and William begin their sexual relationship (when William was fifteen years old) when Sebastian was eighteen+ years of age? If so…big, giant yikes. I don’t recall the age gap between those two characters, but I would assume it’s more than three years. This priest likes ‘em young, it seems. Shockingly, this guy was the most likable character throughout the duet.
I may be judging unfairly, since I skimmed this and may have missed a lot. But a story that can’t grasp enough of my interest to continue after reading 1/3rd of it will never get more than a one star rating from me. The concept was there, but the execution left a lot to be desired.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 30, 2023
Brutal Boys Cry Blood is the sequel to Pretty Girls Make Graves and I started it immediately after finishing the first one. I literally could not put down the first book, but this book just didn't grip me as much as the first one did.
Brutal Boys Cry Blood continues George's story where Pretty Girls Make Graves left off, with George being kidnapped. But after freaking out in captivity, she finds out that it was her initiation into the Orpheus Society. Now as a full member, it is easier for her to get closer to the society members so that she can uncover secrets about her roommate Keely's death. But as she starts to befriend the Orpheans, she starts to question if they are capable of killing one of their own.
I will say that the mystery element of this book was still very much interesting and basically kept me interested enough to finish the book. I really enjoyed that we got to see more into the Orpheus society and the events and rituals that they do. *Spoiler incoming* I didn't like the cannibalism aspect though. I find it so hard that anyone, even spoiled, rich brainwashed kids, would be willing to eat raw human meat to become closer to a god. I just found that too unbelievable. And the plot twist villain was too much and a little predictable. Of course, it would be a person who George never expected. I really started to dislike the romance too. This is my first book that involves a throuple but I don't think it was that well done. If I remember the first book correctly, Sebastian is a decade older than George, and George and William are around the same age. In this book, Sebastian reveals that William was 15 when they first started having relations. Sebastian was basically an older brother figure for William, a person he should have been able to trust, and a priest nonetheless. Does no one else see a problem with this?? The poor boy was groomed by Sebastian. I really liked the idea of an older hot priest being involved in a romance, but Sebastian was just creepy.
Putting aside everything I've complained about, I still mostly enjoyed this series and don't regret reading it. It had the perfect dark academia vibes that I was looking for, and some weirder vibes too that I didn't just outright hate.
Brutal Boys Cry Blood continues George's story where Pretty Girls Make Graves left off, with George being kidnapped. But after freaking out in captivity, she finds out that it was her initiation into the Orpheus Society. Now as a full member, it is easier for her to get closer to the society members so that she can uncover secrets about her roommate Keely's death. But as she starts to befriend the Orpheans, she starts to question if they are capable of killing one of their own.
I will say that the mystery element of this book was still very much interesting and basically kept me interested enough to finish the book. I really enjoyed that we got to see more into the Orpheus society and the events and rituals that they do. *Spoiler incoming* I didn't like the cannibalism aspect though. I find it so hard that anyone, even spoiled, rich brainwashed kids, would be willing to eat raw human meat to become closer to a god. I just found that too unbelievable. And the plot twist villain was too much and a little predictable. Of course, it would be a person who George never expected. I really started to dislike the romance too. This is my first book that involves a throuple but I don't think it was that well done. If I remember the first book correctly, Sebastian is a decade older than George, and George and William are around the same age. In this book, Sebastian reveals that William was 15 when they first started having relations. Sebastian was basically an older brother figure for William, a person he should have been able to trust, and a priest nonetheless. Does no one else see a problem with this?? The poor boy was groomed by Sebastian. I really liked the idea of an older hot priest being involved in a romance, but Sebastian was just creepy.
Putting aside everything I've complained about, I still mostly enjoyed this series and don't regret reading it. It had the perfect dark academia vibes that I was looking for, and some weirder vibes too that I didn't just outright hate.
September 14, 2023
Let me start off positive: the poetry, the allusions, the sentence structure and a lot of the details were beautifully written. This duology had so much potential but it could have really benefited from more editing, I don't think it needed to be two books.
It is smut with a side of murder mystery, not the other way around. If you don't like smutty romance this is not your series.
I don't think Sebastien was necessary for the advancement of the plot, he could have been cut out entirely, at least as a main character/love interest. It's a shame too, I think if he had his own story with a plot line more relevant to his personality/situation, he could have been the most interesting character, but with no substantial context on him other than a stupidly random (and short) abortion clinic scene, his character felt flat and pointless.
The main downfall for me was George (the narrator)'s constant statements about the other characters: "and I know he is ____" She did too much telling and not enough showing, I didn't read the book to hear her opinion, I wanna watch how their story shakes out and draw my own opinions from their actions; not George's thoughts. She did a whole lot of over justifying and monologing and it got really boring at times.
I was excited to finally get to the "twist" at the end, although it would have been less predictable and more mind blowing if Stephanie had made Diana's character less perfect and Monte's character less stupidly cruel.
Speaking of Diana, where the fuck was her backstory? The events in her life that drove her to be a perfect little sociopath? We got at least 100 pages justifying Monte torturing and assaulting people and NOTHING on Diana other than she spent some time abroad studying priestesses? WHY is she a misandrist that literally eats other women?
And don't get me started on the lack of chemistry between George and William in the first book.
ALSO A CAVENDISH IS A TYPE OF BANANA 🍌
It is smut with a side of murder mystery, not the other way around. If you don't like smutty romance this is not your series.
I don't think Sebastien was necessary for the advancement of the plot, he could have been cut out entirely, at least as a main character/love interest. It's a shame too, I think if he had his own story with a plot line more relevant to his personality/situation, he could have been the most interesting character, but with no substantial context on him other than a stupidly random (and short) abortion clinic scene, his character felt flat and pointless.
The main downfall for me was George (the narrator)'s constant statements about the other characters: "and I know he is ____" She did too much telling and not enough showing, I didn't read the book to hear her opinion, I wanna watch how their story shakes out and draw my own opinions from their actions; not George's thoughts. She did a whole lot of over justifying and monologing and it got really boring at times.
I was excited to finally get to the "twist" at the end, although it would have been less predictable and more mind blowing if Stephanie had made Diana's character less perfect and Monte's character less stupidly cruel.
Speaking of Diana, where the fuck was her backstory? The events in her life that drove her to be a perfect little sociopath? We got at least 100 pages justifying Monte torturing and assaulting people and NOTHING on Diana other than she spent some time abroad studying priestesses? WHY is she a misandrist that literally eats other women?
And don't get me started on the lack of chemistry between George and William in the first book.
ALSO A CAVENDISH IS A TYPE OF BANANA 🍌
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 18, 2021
Brutal Boys Cry picks up where Pretty Girls make Graves left off.
The first thing I have to mention is that I love the sense of humor the author has. Yes, this book is dark and may go into grey areas for some but she sneeks a piece or two of places or people from previous books into this story. I am a dedicated follower of Steffanie Holmes. Each series has a darkness about it yet her intellect shows through with details from other aspects of the person she is. I have learned so much and look forward to learning more. But, back to Brutal Boys Cry Blood.
I'm in awe of the research and knowledge she weaves into the places we visit in this story and enthralled with the characters of George, William and Sebastian. Greek mythology has always placed high on my interest and I've learned even more from the orpheus society. My mind is pulled in so many directions between some characters not being exactly what I though or they portrayed to when all the secrets were revealed. This has got to one of her darker series yet I seem to get drawn in deeper with the turn of each page. The curiosity that George has calls to my inner psyche.
These two books were outstanding and I am so intrigued and eager for Leigh's story. Will it be as dark as George's? I can't see how yet, I don't understimate this author.
OUTSTANDING story (yes with kink and taboo situations), so if you don't like that kind of book, please by pass this series, for when you really look into the depths of the story this author deserves to be appreciated for everything she puts into it. Also, if you liked this series I encourage you to read some of her other series. One of my favorites is "The Nevermore Bookshop Mysteries".
The first thing I have to mention is that I love the sense of humor the author has. Yes, this book is dark and may go into grey areas for some but she sneeks a piece or two of places or people from previous books into this story. I am a dedicated follower of Steffanie Holmes. Each series has a darkness about it yet her intellect shows through with details from other aspects of the person she is. I have learned so much and look forward to learning more. But, back to Brutal Boys Cry Blood.
I'm in awe of the research and knowledge she weaves into the places we visit in this story and enthralled with the characters of George, William and Sebastian. Greek mythology has always placed high on my interest and I've learned even more from the orpheus society. My mind is pulled in so many directions between some characters not being exactly what I though or they portrayed to when all the secrets were revealed. This has got to one of her darker series yet I seem to get drawn in deeper with the turn of each page. The curiosity that George has calls to my inner psyche.
These two books were outstanding and I am so intrigued and eager for Leigh's story. Will it be as dark as George's? I can't see how yet, I don't understimate this author.
OUTSTANDING story (yes with kink and taboo situations), so if you don't like that kind of book, please by pass this series, for when you really look into the depths of the story this author deserves to be appreciated for everything she puts into it. Also, if you liked this series I encourage you to read some of her other series. One of my favorites is "The Nevermore Bookshop Mysteries".
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